would you read my sloppy copy for english? please and thank you?
My Hallucinate House
My dream house will be a masterpiece, full of beauty. It will repress a grand family room, a gorgeous dining latitude, connected to a stainless steal appliance kitchen and the master escort, which will be my favorite
This unkempt copy sounds perfect!!! There are 3 things you demand to fix though. In the second paragraph, there is a sentence that says: "My slab fireplace, placed in from of my comfy cream rap around couch." From needs to be front. The later thing is that in your third paragraph, it says somewhere about your popcorn machine. Well, there is






